Data Update 2
Hello and welcome to my second data update.
I'd like to preface this by stating that per Chad's suggestion, I am using a new data set that looks at the homicide rates in major metropolitan areas rather than just per province. As well, Chad had stated that the questions I had asked in Data Update 1 focused too much on individual data points. As such, I want to go forward and focus more on compare and contrast questions instead of questions solely relying on effective use of excel.
Lead Statement
As of 2018, the Toronto metropolitan area has seen a significant spike in homicide rates, making it the only major metropolitan area with a population of 1 million plus that has an increased rate over 10 years.
Excel Workbook Link and Explanation
Here is a link to my slice workbook which shows not only the raw data, but also the homicide rate data of the five biggest metropolitan areas in Canada (Calgary, Edmonton, Montréal, Toronto, and Vancouver) from 2009 to 2019, with the percentage changes. I've included both the percentage change from 2009 to 2017 and 2009 to 2019 to showcase that if there had not been such a huge spike of homicides in 2018, they would not have been the only metropolitan area with an increased rate.
Original Dataset Link
This is the link to the revised data set I have chosen to use.
News Story/Study Link and Brief Summary
I believe this news article that is paying respects to the 96 homicide victims of 2018 is relevant to my data. This article talks about the 96 homicide victims in city of Toronto alone. This is relevant to my data because it sheds some light on why Toronto had such a massive spike in 2018, which inevitably bled into 2019.
Hello Coco,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the news article you chose to try and explain your data. It helps shed some light on the "why" of the data, which adds a lot of interest. One suggestion I would have is to use the actual percentage change of the homicide rates instead of saying "significant spike". It doesn't provide much of a reference point for the reader to compare without looking at the data.
Hey Coco,
ReplyDeleteI like what you have here, this is a good start to analysis along with your news article, the article helps back up and further the stance you are taking.
I do like the intro you put in, helps to tie everything together
Hi Coco,
ReplyDeleteI really like your lead. It made me go, "wow! really?" I would read this article. My only bit of advice for you is to simplify the presentation of your percentage changes in your Slice by changing the decimal place, as Chad mentions in his video lectures. Other than that, I think you've done a fine job.
Hi Coco, I really appreciated your explanation of why you made certain changes. Also I like the article you picked, it will help answer the "why?" I think your lead would be stronger with some more clarity about the "significant spike," — I'd want to see some specific numbers.
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